SHORT STORY : A STRANGER MAKES ME UP
A STRANGER MAKES ME UP
It was 11 p.m. The street looked quite. The sky was cloudy. Only one or
two vehicles passed it. Some of the street vendors went home quickly. They
didn’t want to get a trap due to being rainy. The situation at that night was
really still. At the end of Panglima Sudirman street, there was a thin brown
skin girl walking along the street, wore a dirty blue dress and small bag
around her neck. She stepped alone without friend and sibling. She stopped in
an unoccupied store, took a second hand newspaper and put it on the floor. She
looked so tired so she wanted to sleep as soon as possible. She tried to close
her eyes but she couldn’t do it. She still thought about something. It was a
hard for her. A half an hour later, she got asleep.
It was 7 a.m in the morning. The traffic was very noisy. There were some
street vendors bringing their merchandises. They looked friendly and kept
smiling toward the people. They wanted to persuade them for buying their
products. They offered their merchandises at the front of the occupied store
where the girl was sleeping at. Suddenly the rough tall black guy came nearer
her. He kicked her feet. ”Wake up, please! “Go away from this place.” The girl
woke up quickly. She looked scare as if she saw a ghost in the afternoon. “Let
me wait here for a while, sir, ”said the girl. “I am still sleepy, “ she
continued her speaking while wiping her eyes. “No, get out from this store, you
don’t know that I’m responsible for this place. I will get a problem from my
manager.” As soon as possible she stood up and passed away the store.
The girl walked along the street. She looked hungry and thirsty but she
couldn’t buy anything because there was no any money in her bag. It seemed She
didn’t know that the man chasing her from the store was following her steps. An
hour, she still walked when the bus passed her by. She almost bumped by bus.
Luckily the man pulled her hand out so her life saved. She saw the man
surprisingly. ”Sir, why do you follow me? And Why do you help me?”, She said.
“I’m so sorry if I follow you, I just remember with my sister in Kampong, the
name of small blocks in the village. “Why do you want to end your life? Don’t
you think that It is a great sin?” he continued. “Yes, sir I know it but The
problem is so hard for me I can’t stand it anymore. “No one takes care about me
even my mom and dad”, The man saw the tears were rolling in her red check.
“Let’s walk to the stall nearby, You look so hungry and thirsty. We will talk
it later”. They went to the stall nearby where some traditional food served
there. The man ordered the food and beverage for her. She ate greedy as if she
didn’t eat for along time. The man only stared pity to her.
The girl had finished her eating when she continued to tell a story. She
took a deep breath and talked to him. “ I grow up in a wealthy family. My dad
is a manager in one of company in Jakarta while my mom works as a civil servant
in one of office in my home town, Surabaya. They love each other. Though they
have separated but they can educate me and my little brother well. My dad goes
home once a month and we always go travelling around the city. We are a happy
family. We always get everything what we want. They never disappoint us till
something happen in my warm family. My mom looks different every day. She never
pays attention of us. We are taken care by our maid. After working, she enters
her room and locks it. We seldom talk with her. I feel that I live in another
world. I ever hear her crying along in her bed. She speaks with my dad. She
looks disappointed with him because she finds him with another girl in Jakarta.
She gets information from her close friend. It has occurred for two year.
Eventually They divorce when I passed from Senior High School. My brother and I
live with my mom while my dad is in Jakarta. Sometimes he calls me from there.
I missed my warm family a couple years ago but It can’t happen anymore. Three
months later, My mom marries with her beloved man from Surabaya. He is a cute
cool white man. He works in the same office as my mom. In the first year
of their marriage, my new family looks
pleased and peace. I find my dad’s figure in his. I consider that my warm
family has come back. I saw his character same as my dad. He is a lovely father
for me and my brother,” She took a deep breath and some tears were rolling
down. “Be calm, please. You do not need to continue your story if you feel that
you can’t do it, “The man said. “Oh, no. I will tell you all even though you
are a stranger for me but I trust to you. I wanted to give a part of my grief
story to you, “She added while wiping off the tears. It happened when I came
back from school. My father got mad when I came back home late. I had said that
I got an assignment from my teacher so we needed to do in a group. We did in my
friend’s home but he couldn’t accept my explanation. He was very angry and took
a long stick under the cupboard. He hit me three times in my foot. I felt hurt
at that time. I reported to my mom but she didn’t believe what I was talking
about. She was more believed to him. It seemed love had blinded my mom’s view. She had drugged by love virus.
She couldn’t differ which one was true or false. I had got a rough treatment
for two months. I couldn’t stand anymore. So I decide to go away from my home.
She ended her story.
The man felt pity to her. He tried to make her calm. He put his right
hand onto her hair. I deem you as my sister so you may obey my saying, “He added.
You have to go back home. I’m sure that your mom and dad are worrying you. I
believe that they love you very much. There is no parents that don’t miss her
children. They will do everything for them. Therefore you should go back home.
You should show them that you are a nice and kind hearted girl. Her advises
made me calm for a while. “Where is your address?” , He said. I stay at Mawar
street 79, “ I replied. “Let’s take the bus here, “ He added. They drove a city
bus. It was a luxurious bus. It had a complete facility. There were a
television next to the driver in the top. The seat consisted 45 passengers. That
girl was sitting behind the driver while the man was sitting next to her. They
traveled to the girl’s home. When the bus run, the conductor checked the
passenger’s ticket. He looked serious to give a sign in their tickets. After
finishing to check them, he took a remote control and pressed the channel of
television. He pointed to TV One. Suddenly, The reporter read a news about the
missing girl two days ago. “There is a sad news coming from the family in Jl.
Mawar Surabaya. They have lost their daughter. The characteristic of her is she
is a thin brown skin girl and wears a blue dress. Someone finding her can
contact to TV One as soon as possible. One of her parent will say something to
the viewers. A 50 year old man looked sad and said,” My daughter, please
forgive my fault. I don’t mean to hurt you. I did the mistake for you. Please,
Come home. Your mom and dad always love you so much”. The girl watched his
tired and grief face on it. She considered that her dad missed her a lot. She
was aware that both of them waited her at home. She appeared blissful. The man
sitting next to her smiling and he had
Conductor go down in Mawar street. Ten minutes later, the bus stopped
there. They went down from the bus. The girl seemed so exciting when she saw
her huge and luxurious home. She knew that it is her shady. The man said, “I
can only accompany you here. I can’t enter into your home. You have to go alone
there without me. The girl felt that he had a great man that make her aware.
She just nodded without saying anything. She smiled and looked at glance to him
when he drove on the bus. The girl went to her home when a wrinkle old woman
swept the garden. She saw her surprisingly and yelled out, “Miss Enna is
coming…….Miss Enna is here. She appeared so glad and walked in the home for
telling to Enna’s parent. Enna stood at the gate, was silent and nodded. She trusted
that she had done the mistakes by running away from her home and It made them
worry. Her mom and dad saw her, walk quickly and embraced her. “My beloved
daughter. You make me bother. I yearned you much. Don’t go away from us,
sweetie. They embraced her as if they don’t want to release though a second.
Enna just thought the man assisting her to come home. She didn’t know his name
and address. She just smiled and told to her heart, “He was a stranger that
makes me up.
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