FIRST POEM (FIRST GROUP)
The Teenage Years
© Sarah Gray More By Sarah Gray
Published: June 2014
We learn from our mistakes,
From the wrong turns we take,
From the fake friends we make,
And from the times we almost break.
Our mistakes help us grow,
But at the time, we didn't know.
We didn't want our weakness to show.
At the time, we couldn't let them know.
Our fake friends were there,
But they didn't actually care
Our secrets they would share,
And now as we pass, they just stare.
Not breaking means you're strong.
You'd know where you went wrong,
As if you weren't waiting so long
To explain yourself, but stay strong.
So here's to the liars and traitors,
All the wannabes and haters
And learning from our mistakes
And learning to spot the fakes.
Here's to being a teen
Live it up, 'cause we're living the dream.
Source: https://www.familyfriendpoems.com/poem/the-teenage-years
PRIMAESTI NUGRASTUTI (14 / LM BING A / GROUP 1)
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From the poem, we learn about teen life. That in the life as a teen, we learn from our mistakes, the wrong turns that we take, and also the fake friends that we make. But in fact, our mistakes help us grow. But at the same time, we didn't know, and we didn't care about it. We just didn't want our weakness to show. And our fake friends didnt actually care about us.
But believe it, that we are strong and we had know where we went wrong.
As a teen, all we do is about daydream. Life it up, cause we're living the dream.
LANGUANGE FEATURES
1. Simple Past Tense
a.) We didn't know (didn't + Verb 1)
b.)We didn't want our weakneass to show (didn't + Verb 1)
c.) Our fake friends were there (was/ were + adjective)
d.(They didn't actually care (didn't + Verb 1)
2. Past Continous Tense
a.)As if you weren't waiting so long (was/ were + not + verb ing)
3. Past Perfect Tense
a.) You'd know where you went wrong (had + past participle)
4. Present Continous Tense
a.) Here's to being a teen ( to be + Verb ing)
b.) Live it up, 'cause we're living the dream (to be + Verb ing)
5. Simple Present Tense
a.) We learn from our mistakes ( S + Verb 1/s /es)
b.) Our mistakes help us grow ( S + Verb 1/s /es)
NAME : SABILA FITRI H
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2)GIVE A COMMENT RELATED WITH THE
POEM
The poem is same with my experience is tell about moment adolescent,is have a lot of challenge,like have a lot of fake friends,problem,insecure with my self.But it's okay we know with our weakness and we can learn this,to be better next life and don't judge your weakness because it's gift from Allah SWT,and don't judge your fake friends because this,make yourself stronger to confront the bitterness of life
3)LANGUAGE FEATURE
•You'd know where you went wrong (Simple Pas Future Tense)
•We're living the dream (Present Continuous Tense)
•We learn from our mistakes (Simple Present Tense)
•We didn't want our weakness to show.(Simple Past Tense)
•They didn't actually care (Simple Past Tense)
•You're strong (Simple Present Tense)
•You weren't waiting so long (Past Continuous Tense)
ABEDNEGO RD XI MIPA 1/1
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Summary/Main Point
•that poem told us about what we'll facing at this teenage time. From that poem, we can took a lesson that our mistakes from this teenage time, will help us to grow, to be the better person. Eventhough surrounding by many mistakes, fake friends, and other hard times, we must be able to realize, that problems, will make us to be stronger and better person. Keep your head up, and never surrender, because we're living the dream.
Language Feature
• Simple present tense
We learn from our mistakes.
• Simple past tense
We didn't want our weakness to show.
• Past continuous tense
As if you weren't waiting so long.
• Present continuous tense
Cause we're living the dream.
AINUN NISA A K/ XI MIPA1 /04
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the poem is tell about fake friends some liars and traitors learn from the mistakes.The main poin is when some teenage learn from mistakes that their make before. even surrounding by many mistake,fake friends and other hard times we must be able to realize,that problem make us to be better. all we do is about daydream, we are strong and we had know where we went wrong,and from the mistakes, will help us to grow to be better person. so believe to yourself and be strong.
2) language feature
•Simple present tense:
-we learn from our mistakes
• Simple past tense:
-we didn't know
-they didn't actually care
-we didn't want our weakneass to show
•Present continous tense:
-cauae we're living the dream
•Past continous tense:
-you weren't waiting so long
•Past perfect tense:
-you had know where you went wrong
YUNI SETYOWATI XI MIPA1 no 29
ReplyDelete• Main point of the poem is when some teenage learn from mistakes that their make before. About fake friends some liars and traitors learn from the mistakes. Nobody perfect in this world,that's why we have to learn and we have to know what our mistakes,what our weakness,and from that we have to be a strong person.
• Language Featured from the poem above is
1. Simple past tense:
-we didn't know
-they didn't actually care
-we didn't want our weakneass to show
2. Past continous tense:
-you weren't waiting so long
3. Simple present tense:
-we learn from our mistakes
4. Past perfect tense:
-you had know where you went wrong
5. Present continous tense:
-cause we're living the dream
IVAN HERMANSYAH
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📌 Summary :
Based on the poem, we know that the problems on teen's life are about mistakes and wrong. The mistakes and the wrong can be material for learn and for help us to grow. Beside that, the problems on teen's life is about fake friends too. The fake friends are dangerous, because, they are can share our secrets and they are can be our friends, but actually they are didn't care about what happened with us.
It is a lot of the problem that teen have, but, as a teen, we must be stay strong and stay learn with what our mistakes and our wrong. Come on, live it up and let life flow because we are living the dream.
📌 Language Feature :
1) Simple Present Tense
-> We learn from our mistakes
2) Simple Past Tense
-> We didn't know
-> We didn't want our weakness to show
-> They didn't actually care
3) Past Perfect Tense
-> You'd know where you went wrong
4) Past Continuous Tense
-> You weren't waiting so long
5) Present Continuous Tense
-> We're living the dream
Ayu Damayanti C/XI MIPA 1/07
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We should learn from the mistakes that we made in the past. Such as the wrong ways that we choosed also fake friends that we ever had. Those false steps can make us became a better person so we can replace the failure with our success. We must find the good friend that stays with us not only in our joys but also in our sorrow. Don't ever give up! From our past we know which one is wrong and which one is right. All teenagers will face the same things. Just let it flow and focus in catching our dreams.
LANGUAGE FEATURED
1. Simple Past Tense
-We didn't know
-We didn't want our weakneass to show
-Our fake friends were there
-But They didn't actually care
-Our secrets they would share
-At the time, we couldn't let them know.
2. Simple Present Tense
-We learn from our mistakes
-From the wrong turns we take
-From the fake friends we make
-And from the times we almost break.
-Our mistakes help us grow,Our mistakes help us grow
3. Past Continous Tense
-As if you weren't waiting so long
4. Past Perfect Tense
-You'd know where you went wrong
5. Present Continous Tense
-Here's to being a teen
-Live it up, 'cause we're living the dream
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